not very good

not very good really, the humour was poor and pretty obvious, and the timing was terrible. also it was generally pretty confusing, jumpin from one semi-random situation to the next. try harder.

not bad at'll

that was pretty quality to be fair. the shoots, direction, action etc was spot on, looks like it was a lot of hard work on your part. the only downer is the drawing, which is pretty average, but still over all, very very good indeed.